Question
Is my poem ANY good AT ALL??
its for my high school freshman class... let me know if its any good... do you think ill get a decent grade?
Answer
Im sorry, love, but this looks armature. Youre better than this, you know you are. This things looks and feels like a bunch of forced rhymes. Its all pieced together, too. Sure it has flow, but flowing so dang fast, ya know?brbrYou can do better... Luck.
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